waschal
Supervisory Special Agent
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Post by waschal on Sept 2, 2006 3:30:08 GMT -5
it's good thet they like eatch other ;D I hope Victor dosn't brack thet conversation
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Post by martinandsam4eva on Sept 2, 2006 4:01:47 GMT -5
Wonderful update !!! I'm loving this so much ;D It's so good Sam is getting along with Karen, she'll fit right into the family !!
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Post by Riley Green on Nov 16, 2006 1:10:46 GMT -5
A great start honey, waiting anxiously to see where you take this fic - I love that you're using the episodes as a basis for the story, putting a different spin on stuff we already know! Update soon!
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Post by Lu on Nov 16, 2006 3:38:34 GMT -5
Nice to see his mother taking the time to talk to her.
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Post by CharmedWorld on Nov 16, 2006 5:23:42 GMT -5
"he might want to tell you himself when he wakes up." Now that should be interesting! I can't wait for that one! Great chapter! And you better have the next one soon! Nicely written honi!
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Post by corazon on Nov 16, 2006 9:58:43 GMT -5
I like how you imply the flashbacks. Nice story!
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Post by Rat on Nov 19, 2006 23:44:43 GMT -5
Sorry for not updating for what seems like a year. Thank you all for the lovely reviews
Chapter 3- 'He saw, she saw'
One week had past since Sam was last at the hospital. She had been avoiding going to see Martin since she met his mother. Karen was nice enough and was great to talk to but, she seemed to see right through Sam and she didn't like that. Only Martin was able to do that.
Sam called the hospital a couple times a day for updates only to be told there has been no change.
Being her day off, Sam decided it was time to see Martin.
Upon arriving at his room she noticed Karen wasn't there so she went in.
"Hey Martin, it's me again. I'm sorry for not coming by for a while. Work, you know how it is." Sam said
"We had a case similar to the Emily Muller case. Everything from the fancy dinner and going bankrupt to cheating on the spouse. The only difference is the husband cheated not the wife.
Flashback-
"Hey, Samantha." Martin asks Sam as she walks by.
"Yeah?"
"Did Duncan Muller tell us why he took his wife to a fancy dinner the night before she was kidnapped?"
"Np, he never mentioned it. Why?" Sam asks while searching for a file.
"Well, I've been going over his personal credit card records. In the last six months this guy never dropped more than $84 on a meal. That night, he drops $250 at the Augusta Grill."
"That's a lot of cheeseburgers." Says to Martin nodding at his burger on the table smiling.
"Yep." Martin says smiling back
"Especially for someone who's going bankrupt." Sam states leaning in slightly and walking away.
"Thanks."
End flashback
"I always like how you always have food around you. It cracks me up seeing as you are so skinny." Sam says laughing.
Hearing the nurse coming, Samantha decides to let her do her thing and goes to get some coffee.
About 30 minutes later Samantha returns to Martin's room to see Vivian sitting next to him.
Sam knows that Viv and Martin have a tight bond. It became apparent to everyone during the Emily Muller case. Martin called Viv to help him and she didn't hesitate to go.
Sam was listening to Viv talk to Martin and it sounded like Viv was talking to him about the very same thing.
Flashback-
"Martin, why am I here?" Viv asked talking on her cell phone
"I have a hunch and need your help proving it." Martin replies setting up orange cones.
"And you thought you'd call me because if it didn't pan out, I'd go easy on you?" Viv nonchalantly asks
"Exactly." Martin says smiling and receiving one from Viv as well as a small chuckle
"Okay, that cone over there was where Emily's car was. And right here is where Brad Dunsmore, our 'Good Samaritan', was standing."
"He told me he heard the scream, turned, and ran straight at the assailant. All the other witnesses said Brad grabbed the guy before he ever got in the car, right." Martin states
"Yeah, and got a bloody nose for the effort."
"So he hears the scream and bam off he goes. Now by all accounts Emily struggled with her assailant for no longer than 10 seconds, at some point during which she screamed. That means, best case, Brad had 10 seconds to get there...So, time me." Martin gives Viv a stop watch
"I'll start over here where Brad was."
"You're not going to make me scream are you?" Viv asks wondering and really not wanting too.
"Scream." Was all Viv said starting the watch while Martin ran to the other cone.
"Eight seconds, it's doable." Says Viv
"Yeah, that's what I thought." Walking back to Viv breathing hard
"So what are you saying, Brad had a limp?"
"No, it's better. Our homeless women had a very clear recollection of what happened yesterday. According to Wilma, Brad tripped over her cart, stumbled, then got up and ran to wards Emily's car." Martin tells Viv
"So you're saying he didn't get to the car?" Viv asks confused
"No, we know he did, Here's what I am saying. Will you time me again?" He asks walking back to his cone and motioning Viv way from the cart.
"Go." Viv says starting the clock and watching Martin run into the cart, stumble and run to the other cone with amazed look on her face looking at the stop watch.
"Twelve seconds."
"Brad never mentioned Wilma to me, and if he did bump into her cart like she told me, he couldn't have made it to her car in time. She would have been out of the parking lot...Unless." Martin says
"Unless he started running before Emily screamed. Which means he knew what was happening. He was part of it." Viv interrupted helping Martin piece together the puzzle
"Right."
"You do a back round check on this guy?" Viv asks
"It's on its way." replies Martin
"Good." Viv tells Martin obviously impressed and gives Martin a smile.
End flashback
"Martin, you did such a great job on that case. I even told Jack and everyone else and they were all like, 'He did?' Danny's face was funny, Jack was impressed and Sam, well Sam was happy and seemed impressed too." Viv told Martin.
Seeing him like that really got to Viv. She always looked after him and when she wasn't around, he gets shot and almost dies.
"You know Martin. I think you have a crush on Sam. You tried to impress her on your first day and got your head bashed in, then on the Gabe Freeman case. I saw the looks between you and Sam." Viv stated smiling to herself.
"My question is why did you not tell her how you felt? You are really smart Martin but, sometimes I wonder about you. Sam has feelings for you too. I don't know how deep but, she likes you." Viv added shaking her head.
As Viv was about to leave she saw Sam standing in the door way. She wondered how long Sam was there but she figured it was long enough to hear what she told Martin.
"Hey Viv." Sam says
"Hey yourself."
"You've seen right through me when it comes to Martin, eh?" Sam asks
"Yes I have. You have to tell him you have feelings for him too. Even if he can't respond to you." Was all Viv said as she headed back to her hospital room.
'If only it were that easy Viv.' Sam thought heading back into Martin's room instantly taking hold of his hand.
*next chapter up soon*
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Post by Shaniqua on Nov 20, 2006 1:09:33 GMT -5
Sooner please?
Great chapter.
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Post by CharmedWorld on Nov 20, 2006 1:19:44 GMT -5
What?! You're leaving us hanging there?!! *finds the fryingpan* - I'm coming for you missy! My God!
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Post by Lu on Nov 20, 2006 3:10:02 GMT -5
Glad Viv sees it too. maybe now that soemone else knows she will act on it.
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Post by specialfrog on Nov 20, 2006 6:59:57 GMT -5
hey this is great- hope we get more soon!
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Post by Riley Green on Nov 20, 2006 7:31:51 GMT -5
I'm so glad you updated! Can't wait to see what happens next! Get working on that next chapter missy!
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Post by Shaqueen on Nov 20, 2006 17:34:50 GMT -5
Can't wait for more!=)
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Post by ~sammy4marty~ on Nov 21, 2006 2:42:43 GMT -5
Lovely update hun!!!
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Post by corazon on Nov 21, 2006 9:07:56 GMT -5
Yeah, Viv is always a good help in tricky situations Good update, I´m really curious where you will lead this.
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