osobena
Undercover Agent
Thats where she lies broken inside
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Post by osobena on Oct 2, 2006 3:32:43 GMT -5
I couldn't believe that Martin would do that...  |
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weecrum91
Special Agent
...Because It Hurts...<3
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Post by weecrum91 on Oct 2, 2006 16:49:09 GMT -5
i really don't like Martin very much right now!!! so you better continue!!! so he can explain himself!!!
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RUSTNL
UnSub - or just a lurker
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Post by RUSTNL on Oct 4, 2006 21:06:38 GMT -5
i been there before with my ex... i knw wat she felt... i wish i could comfort her...  |
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Post by Shaniqua on Oct 5, 2006 0:15:22 GMT -5
Martin Fitzgerald was destined to be an extraordinary man. Not because his father had the conections to make him, but because whatever he set his mind on, he gets. Whatever he dreams, he follows. But just one of those dreams he didn't seem to grasp. Everytime he met his dream woman.
But then she came into the picture. She had the guts. She was the one who asked him to share a cab with her later to turn that cab ride into a ten month relationship that he had ended. That was when he noticed that his dream woman, was dreaming of him just like he did her.
So he gave her another chance, being there for him and all. He let her in and she let him in. But as time made them wiser and lessons were learnt, they became closer and closer. So close that it wasn't even possible for you to get a single atom between them.
That was once upon a time. Now. Now he gets shrugged off. Now. He gets ignored and gets excuse here and there. And now. They were so far away that sometimes he didn't even think they lived in the same world anymore.
He didn't know when it happened. When she suddenly found a way to slip from his tight grasp. He couldn't pin point the day. He couldn't remember when it happened. Why it happened. But all he could now is to deal with it. How pulled away she was being. Hell. She hasn't even asked for the one thing that gave her pleasure for about... A month.
What was she doing? Was she cheating on him? Was that it? No. Martin Fitzgerald was smart enough to know if his wife was cheating on him. She didn't have late nights at work. Exactly the opposite. She went home first thing when the clock strook 5pm. She never uses her cellphone unless she was being called away at work. She doesn't go on the computer unless she had to put on files or was working. Nothing leading to an affair. So no.
But he was curious. WCC weren't as hazardous as MPU. WCC was all about paperwork and arresting hackers and identity thefts and all that. There were a lot of undercover missions going on but Samantha Spade learnt her lesson so many times in her pervious unit to not be involved and go undercover anymore.
So now. Looking at her shaking body as she slept through a disturbing dream. He thought about comforting her. Putting his arms around her making her feel safe just like he had done before. How he wished it worked out now. The last time that happened. She pushed him away and ran out to the bathroom. He didn't want to go through that rejection anymore. She would tell him when she's ready. He just wished that the time was now.
The ring of the alarm awoke Samatha and made her look up at Martin disgust in her eyes. Clearly what she was dreaming about was about him. Something bad about him. Was it about the accident again? Or has she found out? Ha. He laughed at that thought. He had been oh so good at hiding it she wouldn't find out.
"Sam? You okay?" He asked her knocking into the bathroom to find it door unlocked. He opened the door and saw her. On the floor. Curled up in a ball crying her eyes out.
Martin ran to her side to comfort her but she broke away from his grasp. She shook her head and Martin stood up just looking at her. What else could he do to help those who didn't want it?
So he left her in the bathroom all alone and as time flew and passed by and the first hour ticked since the time he went out adn the time he jogged and ate, he went back inside the bathroom just to find the cold bath water over flowing to the floor as the pouring cold water from the shower hit his unconcious wife's body.
a/n: if anyone is confused, the first chapter is Sam's dream. and i know this question is getting VERY annoying but i just will ask this this one time. should i still continue?
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Post by venus567 on Oct 5, 2006 0:23:57 GMT -5
yes please do! so gald it was a dream!
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Josi
Supervisory Special Agent
You make me really, really happy!
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Post by Josi on Oct 5, 2006 3:19:06 GMT -5
of course you have to continue, since you left us some what confused! thus you have to give us more...
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osobena
Undercover Agent
Thats where she lies broken inside
Posts: 286
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Post by osobena on Oct 5, 2006 3:43:32 GMT -5
Of course you should countinue! :oThis is a stupid question!
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jeepny
Missing person
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Post by jeepny on Oct 5, 2006 4:51:32 GMT -5
Please continue  |
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Post by outtacontrol on Oct 5, 2006 5:08:53 GMT -5
Continue!!! Im confused..!!!!!! xxxx
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weecrum91
Special Agent
...Because It Hurts...<3
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Post by weecrum91 on Oct 5, 2006 12:52:28 GMT -5
yes yes yes yes please continue!!! i really want to know what is going on!!!
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Post by Rat on Oct 5, 2006 13:24:22 GMT -5
yes you have to continue. what is wrong with sam
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Post by fatalattraction on Oct 5, 2006 13:32:48 GMT -5
uh-oh...he better start compressions quick!
Yes you should deffintly keep going...
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Post by Shaqueen on Oct 5, 2006 20:58:45 GMT -5
YAY!! Martin didn't cheat!!!=)Great Update!
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Post by outtacontrol on Oct 6, 2006 16:21:46 GMT -5
or did he? coz he said he is hiding it so well!
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meggi
Special Agent
Please don't ever go
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Post by meggi on Oct 7, 2006 1:50:43 GMT -5
yes yes yes yes you must continue. That is a cliffhanger of an ending (and if you don't continue you need a damn good sequel!)
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